Friday 31 May 2013

Spring is by Sophie


We have been writing autumn poems in class. Sophie took it upon herself to create a spring poem following the same template!

Spring is by sophie
Spring is
A flower blooming
A cricket talking
A new born lamb
One lovely smell
A bright garden
A white daisy
A green tree
One apple ripe
A colourful meadow
A happy dance
A baby bunny
One robin's song



15 comments:

  1. Very cool poem Sophie from Leah

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  2. I like the sentence one apple ripe and i also like the sentence a colourful meadow from Amy and I really like the whole poem but i really really like the poem but those are the sentence's i really like

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  3. Great Sophie I love your poem. P.S. Sophie your poem should be on the radio.

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  4. Hi Sophie

    That was a wonderful poem! Do you practice at home? Bye for now, from Mrs Woolford.

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  5. Hi sophie
    We like your porm!
    From Millie,Louie, Mason,and Tinashe

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  6. HI Sophie

    I loved your poem how did you learn

    to wright poems so good? see you.

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  7. zdravstvuyte
    i like your poem Sophie it is really interesting from matt, katie ,Leah and gabriella

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  8. Your peom was great Sophie
    from Grandma @ Gar

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  9. Kia Ora Sophie


    I really like your poem my favorite lines are a cricket talking and my other favorite line is a colourful meadow from Amy

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  10. Hi its my birthday today the 16 of June. From Tinashe

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  12. Hi Sophie nice poem. From Chloe, Joely, Ava and Bronwyn :)

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  13. hi where's the snow? We are still waiting.

    bye Louie

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  14. hi cool poem sophie.

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  15. Hi sophie cool poem from lily

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