Friday, 31 May 2013

Spring is by Sophie


We have been writing autumn poems in class. Sophie took it upon herself to create a spring poem following the same template!

Spring is by sophie
Spring is
A flower blooming
A cricket talking
A new born lamb
One lovely smell
A bright garden
A white daisy
A green tree
One apple ripe
A colourful meadow
A happy dance
A baby bunny
One robin's song



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15 comments:

  1. Anonymous1 June 2013 at 11:22

    Very cool poem Sophie from Leah

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  2. Anonymous7 June 2013 at 16:53

    I like the sentence one apple ripe and i also like the sentence a colourful meadow from Amy and I really like the whole poem but i really really like the poem but those are the sentence's i really like

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  3. Makenzie8 June 2013 at 18:17

    Great Sophie I love your poem. P.S. Sophie your poem should be on the radio.

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  4. Mrs W12 June 2013 at 12:18

    Hi Sophie

    That was a wonderful poem! Do you practice at home? Bye for now, from Mrs Woolford.

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  5. Anonymous12 June 2013 at 12:31

    Hi sophie
    We like your porm!
    From Millie,Louie, Mason,and Tinashe

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  6. Emma12 June 2013 at 12:31

    HI Sophie

    I loved your poem how did you learn

    to wright poems so good? see you.

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  7. gabriella12 June 2013 at 12:32

    zdravstvuyte
    i like your poem Sophie it is really interesting from matt, katie ,Leah and gabriella

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  8. Anonymous12 June 2013 at 15:56

    Your peom was great Sophie
    from Grandma @ Gar

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  9. Amy13 June 2013 at 07:18

    Kia Ora Sophie


    I really like your poem my favorite lines are a cricket talking and my other favorite line is a colourful meadow from Amy

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  10. Anonymous16 June 2013 at 11:04

    Hi its my birthday today the 16 of June. From Tinashe

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  11. Rtwozero18 June 2013 at 11:57

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  12. Rtwozero18 June 2013 at 11:58

    Hi Sophie nice poem. From Chloe, Joely, Ava and Bronwyn :)

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  13. louie20 June 2013 at 19:58

    hi where's the snow? We are still waiting.

    bye Louie

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  14. lily27 June 2013 at 18:55

    hi cool poem sophie.

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  15. lily5 July 2013 at 11:44

    Hi sophie cool poem from lily

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